Comments on: Still and Maybe More: a Trilogy http://tonguesoftheocean.org/2009/08/still-and-maybe-more-a-trilogy/ words and writing from the islands Wed, 18 Jan 2012 06:24:38 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Obediah Michael Smith http://tonguesoftheocean.org/2009/08/still-and-maybe-more-a-trilogy/comment-page-1/#comment-63 Obediah Michael Smith Sun, 09 Aug 2009 08:27:03 +0000 http://tonguesoftheocean.org/?p=889#comment-63 Dis make me won boil fish all over again - enables me to recall when I and the environment out of which these foods came, were younger, newer. This poem allows me to go back to a time when my taste buds worked better as well as my eye sight. How very fresh these foods seem to my senses. Things seem to have turned gray since - emotionally and actually. What a time this poem captures and allows me to access. I am very grateful for desires and emotions it puts me again in touch with. What very fine art - a very fine poem. It makes me nostalgic for a Bahamas which was. It is critical of a time which now paradoxically seems quite delicious. Dis make me won boil fish all over again – enables me to recall when I and the environment out of which these foods came, were younger, newer.

This poem allows me to go back to a time when my taste buds worked better as well as my eye sight.

How very fresh these foods seem to my senses. Things seem to have turned gray since – emotionally and actually.

What a time this poem captures and allows me to access. I am very grateful for desires and emotions it puts me again in touch with.

What very fine art – a very fine poem. It makes me nostalgic for a Bahamas which was. It is critical of a time which now paradoxically seems quite delicious.

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